Please rate/fix my yugioh deck?

i don't know if i can "fix" your deck but i can give you some advice. the first priority of a good /strong deck is to base it around 1 type or attribute and try to keep it balanced for example like 20 monsters 10 magic and 10 trap. i have a warrior deck that's 40 cards with 20 monster 11 magic and 9 trap because warrior types need a lot of power ups so therefore i have more magic than trap so have all your cards be linked together and try to get a lot of cards that allow you to special summon other cards and try to overwhelm your opponent and try to have 4 or 5 tributes so you still get monsters you don't have to tribute to summon the monster and use your opponents cards to your advantage have them not be able to attack or have them fill up their field and make them useless like royal decree or jinzo or swords of revealing light or in my case silent swordsman lv7 which makes their monsters magic and traps useless or a giant trunade to get an open shot at them just think outside the box and keep it balanced